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Homework 1/23/08
By hillarh | January 23, 2008
For my Essay 1 I plan on rereading it to see what I think needs to be changed. I already know that I will be trying to strengthen the audience appeal as well as my word choices. Also, doing peer review influenced me to strengthen my essay after reading Ke’ Lita’s essay because her conclusion was exceptional. My writing so far consisted of reading the article and doing a lot of annotations, which helped me with my topics as well as examples. It also consisted of critically thinking about what I wrote and finding good examples. To strengthen my writing process I guess I could write it sooner so that I have more times to reread it and find changes and mistakes. For me peer review is SOOOOOOO important to me not only in writing because I also use it in my art work where in classes and project I critique others as well as they critique me. This will also help me in my art field for the rest of my career. By using this step of understanding and accepting other’s views, it will help me in my art field as well as my writings for English and also for my writings for all of my college classes. After college I am bound to do more writings and I will be able to strengthen them by what I learn in my English classes, also I will be able to assist my children and friends with their essays when needed.
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